Short Stories & Flash Fiction Published on Feb 11, 2014 Comments 14 Sapphire written by Carol J Forrester Dear Jeremy, I wanted to talk about Sapphire. The stripper you slept with last Easter when I went home for my mother’s funeral. You were right. Sapphire is much better with her mouth. Rate ThisShare this:TweetShare on TumblrLike this:Like Loading...
Valerie says Feb 11, 2014 I love this. A “Dear John” letter of sorts, delivered like a kick in the teeth. Great little piece of writing! Reply
caroljforrester says Feb 11, 2014 Thank you very much, I’m glad you enjoyed it. I quite like writing the odd piece in letter form. Reply
caroljforrester says Feb 11, 2014 Thank you very much, ‘Zing’ has to be one of the best responses I could get. Reply
caroljforrester says Feb 11, 2014 Does dear John have something to do with the movie, because if so I haven’t watched it. Reply
andy1076 says Feb 11, 2014 oh no its just a slang that seems to be used a lot on the newspapers and those random free magazines in the comedy sections and stuff 🙂 Reply
caroljforrester says Feb 24, 2014 Lovely that you think so. I was rather chuffed with this one, especially since my writing took a turn for the lovey-dovey a few months back. (New relationship) Still very happily involved but love has stopped throwing itself into my writing as much. Reply
vonzex says Feb 24, 2014 I don’t mind the lovey-dovey stuff from time to time :). Having a partner can be great inspiration in writing. Reply
I love this. A “Dear John” letter of sorts, delivered like a kick in the teeth. Great little piece of writing!
Thank you very much, I’m glad you enjoyed it. I quite like writing the odd piece in letter form.
You do it well, because it really worked!
Thank you.
love the punch line!
Thank you, I’m rather fond of it too.
ZING! Awesome short work.
Thank you very much, ‘Zing’ has to be one of the best responses I could get.
lol!! that’ll do it as a perfect dear John 😀
Does dear John have something to do with the movie, because if so I haven’t watched it.
oh no its just a slang that seems to be used a lot on the newspapers and those random free magazines in the comedy sections and stuff 🙂
Oh, wow. I guess that saying is true: less really is more :D!
Lovely that you think so. I was rather chuffed with this one, especially since my writing took a turn for the lovey-dovey a few months back. (New relationship)
Still very happily involved but love has stopped throwing itself into my writing as much.
I don’t mind the lovey-dovey stuff from time to time :). Having a partner can be great inspiration in writing.