Dear Jeremy,
I wanted to talk about Sapphire. The stripper you slept with last Easter when I went home for my mother’s funeral.
You were right. Sapphire is much better with her mouth.
Published on Feb 11, 2014
Dear Jeremy,
I wanted to talk about Sapphire. The stripper you slept with last Easter when I went home for my mother’s funeral.
You were right. Sapphire is much better with her mouth.
I love this. A “Dear John” letter of sorts, delivered like a kick in the teeth. Great little piece of writing!
Thank you very much, I’m glad you enjoyed it. I quite like writing the odd piece in letter form.
You do it well, because it really worked!
Thank you.
love the punch line!
Thank you, I’m rather fond of it too.
ZING! Awesome short work.
Thank you very much, ‘Zing’ has to be one of the best responses I could get.
lol!! that’ll do it as a perfect dear John 😀
Does dear John have something to do with the movie, because if so I haven’t watched it.
oh no its just a slang that seems to be used a lot on the newspapers and those random free magazines in the comedy sections and stuff 🙂
Oh, wow. I guess that saying is true: less really is more :D!
Lovely that you think so. I was rather chuffed with this one, especially since my writing took a turn for the lovey-dovey a few months back. (New relationship)
Still very happily involved but love has stopped throwing itself into my writing as much.
I don’t mind the lovey-dovey stuff from time to time :). Having a partner can be great inspiration in writing.