“Pass us that hat would you?” Death asked, “These midges seem to be making a buffet out of my scalp.” “You sure?” Looking at the hat he was referring to I wondered if it was more than the midges getting to him. Hot countries always left him a bit, well, off. “Just hand it over already.” I shrugged but did as he said. The previous owner didn’t seem to mind too much, but then again he was already halfway across the Otherside and what was left was raw meat about to turn bad. “Five more,” I said. “Then we’re done.” 
Published on Mar 13, 2014
You’ve got some wonderfully gruesome imagery there, Carol. Great story!
Thank you Karen. 😀
Very clinical. Well done.
Thanks, that was what I was going for. 😀
Carol, you achieved clinical and I really laughed at your opening lines. More power to the midges!
janet
Thank you and I was quite proud of the midges too.
Ha!ha!”Hot countries always left him a bit, well, off”-loved this and “raw meat about to turn bad.”-very funny! Or, maybe I am twisted to think of death as funny 😛 Cool take on the prompt Carol 🙂
Thank you very much, and it was meant to be a funny piece so I’m glad you found it so.
🙂
Very interesting! Nice job.
Thank you.
i know i’m not supposed to laugh at such a serious subject, but, pardon me, i can’t help myself.
It’s supposed to be funny, so laughing is a good thing. 😀
Poor Death, those midges would drive anyone to distraction 🙂
They are persistent blighters. 😀
Great story Carol, there seem to be a lot of stories about death and associated occasions. Must be a lot of like minded writers out there.
Well they do say there is nothing truly original anymore.
A lot of variations on a theme Carol.
I’ll drink to that – where is the hat? Good piece Nan
The hat was still on the previous owner’s head. Thanks for the comment.
Humorous story and done well. Death wearing a hat? Somehow I’ve always pictured him with the hood and cape. I guess that’s now old-fashioned.
There are some fantastic versions of Death out there. I just like the idea of him wearing a stupid hat to fend of midges.
Thanks for the comment. 😀
Ewww..and I mean that in the nicest way.
Well thank you for the eww.
Anytime!
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Made me shudder (in a good way) 🙂
Well as long as it was in a good way. 😀
Gruesomely good!
Thank you. 😀
I love how you say so much while saying so little!
And, I’m not sure if it’s just me, but I feel a bit of Beckett (whom I LOVE) in your words. I’ll have to check out some more of your writing and see if it’s a continuing theme…!
xLoJu