“I think I’ve made a mistake,” Hannah said, teeth biting into her bottom lip as she glanced at her mother’s reflection standing in the mirror behind her own. “How do you know when you’ve found the one?”
“You just know,” shrugged her mother, stepping back to analysis the cut of Hannah’s hem before harrumphing and waving a hand to indicate she should turn around.
“And if I don’t feel it,” Hannah asked.
“Then we tell the shop assistant to bring you another and we see if that looks any better, it’s a dress dear, not the man you might marry.”
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Very good! Like the way you wrote this. I hope she finds the right dress to go with her man! x
Let us hope so. 😀
Very clever – the last line was a real surprise.
I’m glad you thought so. Thank you for commenting. 😀
Oh lovely! I just assumed that she was getting ready for the big day. Then again, I think you meant that to happen 😉
I certainly wanted to lead people astray with their initial impression. I’m glad to hear it worked. 😀
I loved this. 🙂 So cleverly written.
Thank you very much. I’m glad that you think so. 😀
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