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Lioness [A DVerse Prompt]

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The living room was your first hunting ground.

Like a lioness with belladonna in her eyes

I watched you prowl these lands

unsure if I

was prey

or pride.

Pressed into every curve and line

flesh so tight

to planes I’d not thought to seek.

You were something else entirely

a fluidity of your presence stretched…

Beyond this livingroom.

Beyond us

to a point where you were not mine

but their’s.

Everyones.

Shade like a shadow

I melted into the background

turned to scenery

a prop.

I watched your prowl from the scrub.

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Carol Forrester is a twenty-four year old writer trying to be a better one. Don’t ask her what her hobbies are because the list doesn’t get much beyond, reading, writing and talking about the same. She has a 2:1 BA degree in history from Bath Spa University and various poems and stories scattered across the net. Her flash fiction story ‘Glorious Silence’ was named as River Ram Press’ short story of the month for August 2014 and her short story ‘A Visit From The Fortune Teller’ has been showcased on the literary site Ink Pantry’s. Most recently, her poem ‘Sunsets’ was featured on Eyes Plus Words, and her personal blog Writing and Works hosts a mass of writing from across the last five years. She has been lucky enough to write guest posts for sites such as Inky Tavern and Song of The Forlorn and is always open to writing more and hosting guest bloggers here on Writing and Works. With hopes of publishing a novel in the next five years and perhaps a collection or two of smaller works, Carol Forrester is nothing if not ambitious. Her writing tries to cover every theme in human life and a lot of her work pulls inspiration from her own eccentric family in the rural wonders of Shropshire life.

23 Comments

  1. I love the story of being: Pressed into every curve and line

    flesh so tight

    And becoming a background ~

    Very well done with lines, thanks ~

  2. This is a tight write. – I love the way you fit the lines in and especially the fluidity one…it just works well. So many takes and all really are enjoyable to read. Thanks, Carol. Your handling of the prompt is inspiring.

  3. There is a sense of loss..melting into the background..the scenery…a prop in everyday life..I think it is cool where you went with this prompt. I have been enjoying reading where our minds have gone tonight.

  4. This is excellent. You used the words in such a way that I would not even have noticed that they were the ‘imposed phrases’ unless I had read them as part of the prompt. Truly a meaningful poem…and such atmosphere! Bravo.

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