Fall in with me here,
these lines will not march themselves.
Why are you waiting?
Stay and we will go without,
leave you the dust of our wake.
No idea what’s going on with my poetry recently.
Published on Oct 6, 2015
Fall in with me here,
these lines will not march themselves.
Why are you waiting?
Stay and we will go without,
leave you the dust of our wake.
No idea what’s going on with my poetry recently.
I thought it was beautiful and you stuck to the form of the tanka really well! The best poetry is the kind that takes you on an unexpected journey 🙂
Indeed. I love how expressive tankas and hiakus can be despite how restrictive the syllable count is.
True – in a way, they force you to make every word count!