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Poetry Anthology Week Five – Just In Time

Just In Time – Brittaina Goffy

Send a jolt
as your feet hit the ground
harder, faster
lighter, quicker
see all the people ahead
unable to compute
their times in your head
If you make it Just In Time
You’ll gain a loss rising up
If you push it, if you make it
Just In Time

Just In Time – Carol Forrester

It was always by the skin of your teeth,

a hair’s breadth,

a fingertip,

a quarter of an inch,

a whisker,

a jot,

just in time.


You had no interest in cushioning yourself,

instead you barrelled in full force

let the concrete skim past,

admired the scuffs on your skin from that last close call.

Did not look back to see how near it had really been

or how much wreckage you had left in your wake.


Watching you I could feel the hitch in my throat,

screams trapped behind my thorax

convinced that this time you’d crash,

you would burn and I would have to watch.


I did not have to watch.

In the end it was sudden and unexpected.

When I check my palms there were no half-moon scars

no pulse jumping beneath my skin,

just quiet

so heavy and dark you vanished into it

and were gone.


You were gone

and we were out of time.


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Carol Forrester is a twenty-four year old writer trying to be a better one. Don’t ask her what her hobbies are because the list doesn’t get much beyond, reading, writing and talking about the same. She has a 2:1 BA degree in history from Bath Spa University and various poems and stories scattered across the net. Her flash fiction story ‘Glorious Silence’ was named as River Ram Press’ short story of the month for August 2014 and her short story ‘A Visit From The Fortune Teller’ has been showcased on the literary site Ink Pantry’s. Most recently, her poem ‘Sunsets’ was featured on Eyes Plus Words, and her personal blog Writing and Works hosts a mass of writing from across the last five years. She has been lucky enough to write guest posts for sites such as Inky Tavern and Song of The Forlorn and is always open to writing more and hosting guest bloggers here on Writing and Works. With hopes of publishing a novel in the next five years and perhaps a collection or two of smaller works, Carol Forrester is nothing if not ambitious. Her writing tries to cover every theme in human life and a lot of her work pulls inspiration from her own eccentric family in the rural wonders of Shropshire life.

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