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Rhyme In Poetry: Discuss

If you’ve followed this blog for a while, you might have noticed that I tend to write in free verse and I don’t use a lot of rhyme. The main reason for this is that I find rhyme can force poets to try and fit words into poems that simply don’t belong. In some cases it even leads to words being created completely out of the blue (which I don’t have a problem with per-say, but if you’re doing it to fit a rhyme scheme, you’re not doing it for the right reasons).

When I sit down to write a poem I try and hammer the first four lines out and then I let the poem take me where it’s going to take me. Then I go back and find the lines I really like, delete the rest and re-write the poem based on those. Each time I make an edit I read the whole poem aloud before moving on to the next amendment. I do this to make sure the poem sounds right.

I still use rhyme from time to time and I have written quite a few fixed form poems where a rhyming scheme has to be followed, but in my mind, rhyming should come last in the list of things you need for a poem. The top of that list should always be ‘what am I trying to say?’

You can of course write a nonsense poem if you want, but I’ve always found the poems that I like the most are the ones with a background to them. They take you on a journey with the poet.

I’m interested to hear what the other poets on wordpress have to say about this so I’m hoping you’ll voice your opinions below and chime in on the comments others have made.

Tell me, where do you fall when it comes to rhyming and poetry?


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Carol J Forrester is a writer and a history geek. Her debut collection 'It's All In The Blood' came out November 2019. She has a 2:1 BA degree in history from Bath Spa University, enjoys judo at least twice a week, and tries to attend poetry events around the Midlands when she can. Her flash fiction story ‘Glorious Silence’ was named as River Ram Press’ short story of the month for August 2014 and her short story ‘A Visit From The Fortune Teller’ has been showcased on the literary site Ink Pantry. Her poems ‘Sunsets’ and ‘Clear Out‘ were featured on Eyes Plus Words, and two of her poems were included in the DVerse Poets Pub Publication ‘Chiaroscuro’ which is available for purchase on amazon.Her poem ‘Until The Light Gets In‘ was accepted and published at The Drabble and her poem ‘Newborn’ was published by Ink Sweat & Tears. She has been lucky enough to write guest posts for sites such as Inky Tavern and Song of The Forlorn and has hosted a number of guest bloggers on her site Writing and Works.


  1. I only write what needs to come out, most of the time I just channel the emotions that need to come out, the ones I dare not speak of with anyone. Just like a musician play with notes, so does my soul plays with the words.

      • Meaning… emotions are so powerful they do have the tendency to have run on words, if I think of words that will rhyme then there no emotion or feelings only words to fit…

  2. Laura Bloomsbury says

    I rarely manage to rhyme and am always quite surprised if I start to – rhymes are difficult to make subtle and less predictable. Alternate lines work quite well but my favourite is end & start of lines

    • I have to catch myself sometimes because I often find myself using the first line as the last line in poetry and I think I sometimes rely on that repetition to create a link too much. I think you hit the crux of the matter though, rhyming is difficult to incorporate in a subtle manner.

  3. agresticsolitude says

    Personally I dislike rhyming poetry as it appears very childlike. My fave poet on WP is the Welsh Tala Vernon, and she doesn’t write in rhyme, but I think she uses assonance, here and there, but those who don’t know what assonance is would probably not know it. I read somewhere once that if you can only write in rhyme, then you are not a poet. I think it’s because even children, and non-poets can write in rhyme, but cannot write using assonance. Assonance comes from within the poet, it’s how the poet hears the poem, and that comes with experience, I believe. Anyway, I’ve probably offended all the rhymers now, but such is life!

    • I’ll admit I’m not a fan on obvious rhyme because it does have the pitfalls of sounding childish at times. I think you’re right about assonance though.

      • agresticsolitude says

        Yes, I should have said ‘obvious rhyme’, I think that’s what I’m referring too, when people write…’I was feeling bold in the cold, and the walls had mold’…that sort of thing seems to make me cringe. Anyway, great post, and quite brave really, considering all the rhymers on WP!!

        • I did wonder if I’d get some backlash but most of the comments have been from none-rhymers. It was the sheer amount of obvious rhyming that I was coming across on the poetry tag that made me what to write this post. I think it can take a lot of courage to realise that you can write poetry without rhyming if you’ve not been exposed to poetry without rhyme before.

  4. Agree Carol. The rhyme scheme can take over the poem and leave its original purpose behind in the dust.

    I finally gave up on rhyme when I realised just how hard it is to properly construct a rhyming poem.

    More work than I’m prepared to put in. I prefer to follow the ideas ‘hot’.


    • I find it depends on the skill with which rhyme is used. If it’s used well you’re completely right but if it’s forced then I feel like it can ruin a poem and make it seem almost trivial.

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