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Rhyme In Poetry: Discuss

If you’ve followed this blog for a while, you might have noticed that I tend to write in free verse and I don’t use a lot of rhyme. The main reason for this is that I find rhyme can force poets to try and fit words into poems that simply don’t belong. In some cases it even leads to words being created completely out of the blue (which I don’t have a problem with per-say, but if you’re doing it to fit a rhyme scheme, you’re not doing it for the right reasons).

When I sit down to write a poem I try and hammer the first four lines out and then I let the poem take me where it’s going to take me. Then I go back and find the lines I really like, delete the rest and re-write the poem based on those. Each time I make an edit I read the whole poem aloud before moving on to the next amendment. I do this to make sure the poem sounds right.

I still use rhyme from time to time and I have written quite a few fixed form poems where a rhyming scheme has to be followed, but in my mind, rhyming should come last in the list of things you need for a poem. The top of that list should always be ‘what am I trying to say?’

You can of course write a nonsense poem if you want, but I’ve always found the poems that I like the most are the ones with a background to them. They take you on a journey with the poet.

I’m interested to hear what the other poets on wordpress have to say about this so I’m hoping you’ll voice your opinions below and chime in on the comments others have made.

Tell me, where do you fall when it comes to rhyming and poetry?

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Carol Forrester is a twenty-four year old writer trying to be a better one. Don’t ask her what her hobbies are because the list doesn’t get much beyond, reading, writing and talking about the same. She has a 2:1 BA degree in history from Bath Spa University and various poems and stories scattered across the net. Her flash fiction story ‘Glorious Silence’ was named as River Ram Press’ short story of the month for August 2014 and her short story ‘A Visit From The Fortune Teller’ has been showcased on the literary site Ink Pantry’s. Most recently, her poem ‘Sunsets’ was featured on Eyes Plus Words, and her personal blog Writing and Works hosts a mass of writing from across the last five years. She has been lucky enough to write guest posts for sites such as Inky Tavern and Song of The Forlorn and is always open to writing more and hosting guest bloggers here on Writing and Works. With hopes of publishing a novel in the next five years and perhaps a collection or two of smaller works, Carol Forrester is nothing if not ambitious. Her writing tries to cover every theme in human life and a lot of her work pulls inspiration from her own eccentric family in the rural wonders of Shropshire life.

30 Comments

  1. I only write what needs to come out, most of the time I just channel the emotions that need to come out, the ones I dare not speak of with anyone. Just like a musician play with notes, so does my soul plays with the words.

  2. I rarely manage to rhyme and am always quite surprised if I start to – rhymes are difficult to make subtle and less predictable. Alternate lines work quite well but my favourite is end & start of lines

    • I have to catch myself sometimes because I often find myself using the first line as the last line in poetry and I think I sometimes rely on that repetition to create a link too much. I think you hit the crux of the matter though, rhyming is difficult to incorporate in a subtle manner.

  3. agresticsolitude says

    Personally I dislike rhyming poetry as it appears very childlike. My fave poet on WP is the Welsh Tala Vernon, and she doesn’t write in rhyme, but I think she uses assonance, here and there, but those who don’t know what assonance is would probably not know it. I read somewhere once that if you can only write in rhyme, then you are not a poet. I think it’s because even children, and non-poets can write in rhyme, but cannot write using assonance. Assonance comes from within the poet, it’s how the poet hears the poem, and that comes with experience, I believe. Anyway, I’ve probably offended all the rhymers now, but such is life!

    • I’ll admit I’m not a fan on obvious rhyme because it does have the pitfalls of sounding childish at times. I think you’re right about assonance though.

      • agresticsolitude says

        Yes, I should have said ‘obvious rhyme’, I think that’s what I’m referring too, when people write…’I was feeling bold in the cold, and the walls had mold’…that sort of thing seems to make me cringe. Anyway, great post, and quite brave really, considering all the rhymers on WP!!

        • I did wonder if I’d get some backlash but most of the comments have been from none-rhymers. It was the sheer amount of obvious rhyming that I was coming across on the poetry tag that made me what to write this post. I think it can take a lot of courage to realise that you can write poetry without rhyming if you’ve not been exposed to poetry without rhyme before.

  4. Agree Carol. The rhyme scheme can take over the poem and leave its original purpose behind in the dust.

    I finally gave up on rhyme when I realised just how hard it is to properly construct a rhyming poem.

    More work than I’m prepared to put in. I prefer to follow the ideas ‘hot’.

    Cheers.

    • I find it depends on the skill with which rhyme is used. If it’s used well you’re completely right but if it’s forced then I feel like it can ruin a poem and make it seem almost trivial.

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