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#SundayPhotoFiction: Stranded

Isabelle watched the foam settle as the speedboat winked out of view, scurrying its way back to the city. The old man hadn’t been keen to take her, counting her money twice before letting her aboard and then lingering for longer than necessary when she leapt out into the shallows.

Her skirts were damp, but she’d kicked her shoes free before getting off the boat. Her feet had dried while she waited.

She checked her watch and scowled. The glass was cracked, had been since earlier that morning when a cyclist outside her apartment careened into her. It was her own fault. If she’d not spent so long on land, she might have noticed him before he had chance to get close. Instead she’d been thrown from her thoughts by the bite of handlebars into her ribs.

The wind picked up and threw the waves higher along the beach. Isabelle waded out, shivering as the water closed around her ankles.

‘Please,’ she cried. ‘I’m sorry. I have learnt my lesson!’

Above her a seagull cried out but that was it.

‘Father please!’

The sea did not answer.

Isabelle dropped to her knees and sobbed.

‘Please. I’m ready to come home.’

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Photo Credit: Fandango

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Carol Forrester is a twenty-four year old writer trying to be a better one. Don’t ask her what her hobbies are because the list doesn’t get much beyond, reading, writing and talking about the same. She has a 2:1 BA degree in history from Bath Spa University and various poems and stories scattered across the net. Her flash fiction story ‘Glorious Silence’ was named as River Ram Press’ short story of the month for August 2014 and her short story ‘A Visit From The Fortune Teller’ has been showcased on the literary site Ink Pantry’s. Most recently, her poem ‘Sunsets’ was featured on Eyes Plus Words, and her personal blog Writing and Works hosts a mass of writing from across the last five years. She has been lucky enough to write guest posts for sites such as Inky Tavern and Song of The Forlorn and is always open to writing more and hosting guest bloggers here on Writing and Works. With hopes of publishing a novel in the next five years and perhaps a collection or two of smaller works, Carol Forrester is nothing if not ambitious. Her writing tries to cover every theme in human life and a lot of her work pulls inspiration from her own eccentric family in the rural wonders of Shropshire life.

18 Comments

  1. Abhijit Ray says

    Why is Isabelle crying? Where is her father? What is she waiting for?

  2. A great story. I’m wondering what brought her on to the land in the first place and how long her father is going to let her suffer? But I guess that’s a whole new story.

  3. Children leaving home to find themselves is age-old. Hopefully her father will let her return. Nicely done.

  4. I am assuming she is a mermaid hence the punishment. Hope her father returns for her soon! Nice imaginative piece. I loved the watch and bike part!

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