Skipping Out On Supper – #DVersePoets

Gutted and skinned, the rabbit seemed tiny. It was too young, but the other snares were empty, and night crept upon them before Gart could hunt the woods.

Devlin boned the little creature, and carved it up into rough chunks. Enough so that there would be a piece or two each in the stew. Gart watched him across the fire and when he stood, Devlin called another of the men to watch the pot.

Away from camp, Gart’s tracks faded, along with the sound of voices.

‘You’re improving,’ said Gart, his lean form rising from a crouch just inches away. He snaked a hand inside Devlin’s collar and brought the younger man closer. ‘I will make you moan like an autumn wind high in the lonesome treetops,’ he whispered, his grip tightening.

‘After,’ Devlin promised.

‘Ever after,’ said Gart. ‘From tonight, until the end.’


Lillian has selected two lines from Carl Sandburg’s Jazz Fantasia for the writers at the pub to chose between tonight. I went with the first option “moan like an autumn wind high in the lonesome treetops”.


  1. This line “He snaked a hand inside Devlin’s collar and brought the younger man closer” truly tells alot about Gart’s character….it says so much in just those first few words of the sentence.


  2. I’m so glad you went for that line, Carol. I was tempted, but plumped for the other one. You made me sit up with the opening words ‘Gutted and skinned’ and the thought of the tiny, too young rabbit being boned and carved into chunks – not a pleasant thought for a vegetarian animal lover! I’d like to find out more about what’s going on between Gart and Devlin.


  3. A slice of BROADBACK MOUNTAIN here, virile young men, without women, whose hormones and tendencies overpower them.


  4. Oooh Carol, I love the sensuousness of this all. From the skinning of the too-small rabbit to the snaking of the hand inside the collar…


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