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  1. The image of the “the ratcheting wind in my nerves,” is so strong, so palpable! Gorgeously rendered 💝

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  2. The tension here is so tight and barely restrained, it’s actually frightening. “The ratcheting wind in my nerves” – powerful imagery.

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