You are here now, though not quite part of this world just yet.
Suspended inside me, you are growing into yourself,
becoming a person, becoming someone waiting for the first fall.
Our (optional) prompt for the day is to write a sijo. This is a traditional Korean poetic form. Like the haiku, it has three lines, but the lines are much longer. Typically, they are 14-16 syllables, and optimally each line will consist of two parts – like two sentences, or a sentence of two clauses divided by a comma.
NaPoWriMo2021 – Official Day Twenty Prompt
Oh, this is so sijoriffic, CF. Awesome write!
I esp like the last trimester / first fall contrast.
(Friendly proofreader note: Did you typo “though” in Line 1?)
Ah, good spot. Thanks Ron.
Waiting for the first fall … I really liked a lot the image I had in my mind with this idea.
Thanks!