1. You’ve captured a fragile relationship with your words.
    These first two lines really drew me in,
    “Fingertips perched as light as sparrow feet
    on the branches of your shoulders,”


  2. Those first two lines are magical. “a bed of air and ice” of that Ice Queen is a most fragile creation and beautifully described but perhaps not that welcoming to a warm-blooded human.


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