Fool’s Errand

The kindling was damp

but still

you kept at it

with bruised knuckles,

hoping

we’d still ignite.

Dale Dec 29, 2018 at 4:13 pm

A message of not giving up. Nicely done.

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1. Carol J Forrester Dec 29, 2018 at 5:22 pm
  
  Thank you.
  
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Dewin Nefol Dec 29, 2018 at 4:29 pm

Namaste Carol, Happy New Year 🙂

Raw and gritty, with a tender edge.

Namaste 🙂

DN

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1. Carol J Forrester Dec 29, 2018 at 5:22 pm
  
  Thank you. 🙂
  
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The Abject Muse Dec 30, 2018 at 12:14 pm

This is a charming piece. Touches the heart. Well done!

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sammicoxwriter Jan 5, 2019 at 10:00 am

I like the image this conveys with the emotional undertone. Cleverly done 🙂

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1. Carol J Forrester Jan 5, 2019 at 11:35 am
  
  Thank you Sammy.
  
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